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Review of Personal Statement/Letter and Application Essays

Convey your profile in a powerful way.

Showcase your strengths.  Create strong and convincing statements about your suitability as a candidate, and why you should be selected.

Essays are often requested as supplemental to your application.  Commonly these documents may be referred to as: personal statement, personal letter, application essays, or biographical statements.  We provide guidance on how you can write compelling essays that will make you stand out favourably to the admissions committee.

When we review your document, you receive a detailed set of written comments designed to improve the content and quality of your writing. We may pose questions to you designed to get you thinking about how you can use your past experiences to improve the effectiveness of the point you are trying to convey.  We  assist you in developing your work to increase the impact of your writing, while at the same time, being conscious of word count limits.

What We Do

We review make your document and make recommendations on how you can improve your personal statement / application essays to increase your chances of admission.

Provide detailed written comments.

We provide detailed written comments, taking into account your past experiences and achievements that you provided and make suggestions to make your application more effective.

Think about your profile.

We pose questions to you designed to get you thinking about the relevance of story, the impact of your experience, or the effectiveness of the point you are trying to convey.

Flush out the ideas.

We help you to fine-tune both your ideas and your communication of those ideas.

Identify "red flags".

We identify “red flags” (such as misinterpretation of questions, omissions of unique details, and inconsistencies in the application package) that may hinder your chances of admission.

Increase the impact of your essay.

We assist you in developing your stories and experiences to increase the impact of your writing, while at the same time, being conscious of word count limits.

Polish for tone, spelling and grammar.

We deliver comments on refining tone, style, vocabulary and grammar to ensure you produce the best application possible.

Review of Personal Statement / Application Essays / Personal Letter

You will receive a detailed set of written comments for the application document you are applying to. This service is designed to improve the content and quality of your essays.  Your document will go through two levels of review; first by an Astroff Coach, and then by Dr. Robert Astroff personally, before being sent back to you.   


COST: Starts at $250 per draft

Register to start our essay review process.

OTHER OPTIONS AVAILABLE

Brainstorming Session

$200 (1 hour session)

ABS Review

Starting at $150

Resume / CV Review

Starting at $150 

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